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for Unfathomable - Complete

by ColdSilence

person ForgottenPrincess
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated! I am so glad I checked! I am happy that you made Sora scared and freaked out about the whole thing. I mean it seems more realistic that way. I do feel bad for Riku. Because Riku loves Sora and thought they were married....and sora was like "ooo. i am lonely and looking for a good time". Hope to see another update and that your muse stays with you.
PS. I loved that Nemo was in it!
person Amber
schedule December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Thank you for updating the story.
I love it.
Sora freaking out, I feel sorry for him.
And the orcas are plotting something very evil.
I must know what happens next.
Please make more.
T_T
I can't stand waiting.
Please hurry.
person Rainshi
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! I can finally relax. I love it love it love it.
person Rainshi
schedule October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD UPDATE I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH LONGER I CAN TAKE THIS CLIFF HANGER! I KNOW I SHOUDN'T BE DOING THIS, BUT I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! GIVE US SOMETHING AN AUTHORS NOTE TO LET US KNOW HOW THINGS ARE GOING OR IF YOU HAVE GIVEN UP ON THIS. AUHGUIFQIHEDOVAMDLRNJLJMMLUVPO. Sorry that was me hitting my head on the keyboard.
person 13Zeroither
schedule August 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is really great. Keep it up! :D Will Sora become a merman? Will Riku become a human? Will they gain the ability to transform back & forth between human & merman at will? Will the merpeople of Atlantica (including King Triton, ah heck pretty much everyone who lives under the sea) get over their taboo with humans & live upon the surface? What will the Orcas do next? Will Riku join them? Aw, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Rainshi
schedule July 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how much longer I can wait. It's driving me nuts. Oh god give me something so I know if this story will contiune or not!
person Rainshi
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hate begging writers to hurry cause I often believe that it effects the writing, but this story is just so good and the cliff hanger was just to overwhelming. I'm begging you please hurry with the update.
person Rainshi
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
god no matter how many times I read it it just still gets to me. I really need to know what happens please dont' leave us in the dark to long please!~
person Britt
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, very well put together! It's rare to find writing that flows, lacks grammatical errors, and holds attention. Thank you for sharing and for taking the time to create such a great piece. I hope this story continues.
person Lulubell
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1