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for Unfathomable - Complete

by ColdSilence

person Worth every second I waited.
schedule September 17, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I'm one of those older readers, who found this waaay back when it was first being written. I was terribly disappointed when it was seemingly abandoned halfway through. I'd check back every now and then, hoping to see a new chapter, but Time, like Life, moves on for us all, and in time, I admit I forgot about it. Life happened. A lot. Then one day I drifted through AFF's waters again, and here was this treasure, just waiting for me to rediscover! And it has been worth waiting for. The characters are well written, their emotional struggles presented very realistically. I also felt the author struck the right descriptive balance. Things, like the appearance of of characters and the surrounding environment were laid out neatly and elegantly, without getting too flowery, or too euphemistic. I was not expecting it to end the way it did, but find I like it more than anything I had imagined as an finale. So very well done! And thanks for the ride! <3

person It's been awhile...
schedule January 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM

...but so very worth the wait!  I adore this story and I was so thrilled to see new chapters up. You have such a lovely way with words! I can't wait to see where the story goes next <3 <3 <3

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule October 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOSH this story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! PLZ update SOON!!!!!!! I will love u 4EVER!!! Riku needs 2 get a grip on reality. Poor sora needs a hug!!!!! And i wonder how they baby(egg???) is gonna come out. U didn't mention if utter was normal 4 mermen 2 get pregnant n any way. And i hope things get better btween the cup!!!! Plz update, waitin on the edge of my seat!!!!!
person Rainshi
schedule August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh please give me anything ANYTHING even if it's a hey I'm done with this fic. I just can't stand not knowing what's going on with this story. I can't stop reading it over and over and over and over and over. I have to know what's going on here. no computer no internet no time anything aaaanything please.
person Rainshi
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please please let us know you're alive. I keep hearing about all these shootings and I'm afraid you are a victim. Please let us know you're okay.
person Rainshi
schedule May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*hits head on wall* Must wait Must wait must wait. WOIHAGTOIHGBRAGOIHAGEUAGEWOIHAGWIHATW Where's the next chapter GAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! *goes back to hitting head on wall* Must wait Must Wait.
person B
schedule April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It's progressing well, I'm excited to know what will happen next. Thank you for the superb writing, very clean and flows nicely. Keep up the fantastic work.
person Rainshi
schedule March 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
still loving this. I wonder is Roxas or Ventus one of the two are going to be sent as spys cause Briags looks like he would scare Sora, but Roxas or Ventus wouldn't. Maybe look simalar to Sora, but "adopted" by the ocras to get other mers to trust them an then bam ambush.
person Talltree-san
schedule January 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was SO HAPPY to see another chappie added to this story!! Thank you so much! Also the tension is rising even more in the latest update, the situation is very dire and Riku really won't see to reason. And poor Sora is in major shock I just want to give him a big hug and whack Riku over the head with the trident :( .
person Jenmoon1
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow looking foward to the update