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I had no idea you weren't from an English-speaking country! It would seem that congratulations are in order, because your English is better than some of the people that I know, and they were born in America. Can't wait till the next update, and in case you use it sometime later, "hypothetical" is spelled with a 'y', not an 'i'. English has to many letters that make the same sound.

It's me again, looks like reading two chapters of a great story made me forget what you wrote at the beginning. That was my bad. Again, just a few minor misspellings, like using "his" instead of "he's" in one of the sentences; and I like how the kids have trouble with big words, 'cause it makes the story more...authentic, I guess. Anyways, keep up the good work, good luck with school, and I'll be waiting for the next post.

Interesting, to say the least. As a hardcore Dragon Age fan, I like how in-depth you are making this story. Unfortunantly for me, I haven't gotten around to playing the last two DLC packs(college exams as well), so if there are any spoilers for them in the next chapters, a heads-up would be nice. There are a couple of misspellings, but nothing to complicated to figure out (and at least you haven't spelled the word "losing" as "loosing". That's my personal pet peeve.).

Keep up the good work, I can't wait.