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for Dead Effect

by Rraazz12

person Ross Palmer
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this crossover a great deal, well written and paced, looking forward to more.
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great keep up the good work
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
1) Her name is "Melinda," not "Melina," as you wrote it all the way through the story.

2) You need to proofread your story very, very badly.