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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good Story keep it up thanks for addiing in kasumi she not in many romance storys.
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ignore Wakkawakka your use of explicit words are fine no more no less, and yes i know "It is an adult only site after all."
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Needs more kasumi <3
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love where you're headed with this. Can't wait to see the explanation behind Shepard's modifications. Maybe based an asari physiology?
Don't be so hard on yourself with your writing. The story looks great so far!
Don't be so hard on yourself with your writing. The story looks great so far!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Funatari, more, more!
SailorNemesis
SailorNemesis
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do continue, it's good. And make it more explicit, like for example: 'Melina fucked Miranda relentlessly, thrusting her hard member deep into the woman's warm and inviting pussy and she moaned loudly. "Oh my god, fuck me! Miranda screamed in pleasure.' don't be afraid to swear or be completely explicit. It is an adult only site after all.