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for Susan's Paradise

by zebrastories

schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Needs editing though.
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I tend to like the side stories, it can be much more interesting. The flashes between times in Susan's life is a nice touch too. Keep going I really like it.