rate_review Reviews

Your story made me cry. I've only ever come across two or three fanfictions that managed to make me cry. I really think you should write a sequal to this story.

more?

Wow, I loved this story. You left me wishing there was more to it, I dislike a hanging ending but still I loved it

I absolutly love this!!! you must continue it! I fell in love with both zoey and tristan

Wow. Just wow. Your story is one of a few that has actually brought me to tears toward the end, the setup was brilliant and the execution was flawless, and the result was me whimpering and sobbing for a few minutes. You got us thinking 'Alright! They're in love! Nothing can go wrong for them!' Then BAM! Reality in all its cruelness hits us like a freight train, just fucking brilliantly done. That end was just cruel though, leaving us hanging on the edge of our seats wondering by some miracle if its really him, or just a worried co-worker. Just god damn you in your genius and heart wrenching cruelty.

This was highly enjoyable. I rarely (if ever) log in to review a story, but this was simply too good to read and then casually slink off to another story. The characters were real, the emotions were real, and the entire story flowed beautifully. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. Full marks for you! :D

Oh my goodness, you artist!
When it comes to fanfiction I don't tend to find that many that are so awesomely good, but my god! The emotion in this was immense, to the point of tears. The concept was unique, and executed so well.
This could very well be the best fanfiction I've ever read.

Very cool story! I know you aren't planning on leaving it there. I'd love to read more of this.