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October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo. The babies were here so brieflyyyyyy. And my respect for you tenfold when you had Roxas and Axel together. Hallelujah. And that's cute. Riku and namine, they're like...the adorable couple. ; 3;
Cloud and Leon are the old married couple. While Kairi and Sora are the newly wed. Lolol.
Every time I review, the recaptcha gets harder to decipher.
Cloud and Leon are the old married couple. While Kairi and Sora are the newly wed. Lolol.
Every time I review, the recaptcha gets harder to decipher.
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April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this story originally on fanfiction and I miss it being up there. This was one of the first leon/cloud fics I ever read and it's still by far my favorite.
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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:) Thought I'd drop in and say hey. Thank you again for writing this. Never gets old.
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fucking amazing. I mean that was just amazing. both me and my friend stayed up all night long just to finish your story. (Though I had to pass out around chapter 14) I'm not one to read chapter fics for very long but this one just stole my heart and breath away. You, my dear, are just amazing with this story. Loved it. Just freeking loved it! I cant wait to read your other stories as well!
-Kaistern
-Kaistern
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What!? No reviews for this?! Your freaking kidding me! I've read stories that made me cringe with the wording, or grammar, or spelling or all around bad flow that had reviews like "this is great!" " MORE!" but this, this gets NOTHING?! Injustice! This, my friend, is an excellent piece of work! In fact I couldn't stop reading till the end. Then I went to see what others thought of the story and there staring me in the face was a big fat "0" next to reviews. ... You've been throughly neglected you poor, poor writer. *gives you a cookie* Well here is a review.
Good characterization. Good flow. Love Leons thought process. Sora is adorable. The action scenes were very smooth. Not super sugary sweet and not all angsty sour, just right. The only problem I had was the time skips were a little too undefined. All in all, this was a very good story that just pulls you in and wont let go. Bravo!
Good characterization. Good flow. Love Leons thought process. Sora is adorable. The action scenes were very smooth. Not super sugary sweet and not all angsty sour, just right. The only problem I had was the time skips were a little too undefined. All in all, this was a very good story that just pulls you in and wont let go. Bravo!