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I heard about this fic from a friend of mine, i must say i like it a lot :)

Good steamy lemony goodness you have going on here, i'm very much looking forward to more.

More good stuff, I like the juxtaposition between Haswar and Urda, and Urda's rudeness while thinking she's "perfect."

I had a reply to your review of my latest S2 chapter in my reviews area, but AFF's mods sent me a notification telling me I had to remove it, so that's gone. Felt you might want to know I did have a response to you sooner this time.

Oh damn chapter 2 was HOT!

I love this, i really do. If there is more, post it NOW! :)

Another excellent entry. I look forward to seeing more from you.

This was a pretty fun story to read! If there is another chapter to this, please post it. Love it!

While I can't say it's the most intellectually stimulating piece I've ever read, you certainly accomplish what you set out to do. And that is write a sensual, enjoyable lemon. Good work.

It's definitely obvious that Streti is an influence of yours. Your style is unique in a number of ways though, and I enjoyed reading this story. Feel free to explore your own technique, don't worry too much about conforming to the established Streti method. He's an excellent author, but his way isn't the only way. I look forward to reading more from you. Good show.

Very good to see a new story from you! I'm happy my stories have helped inspire you. Now, I do wish there had been a cumshot in there and Urda had found Haswar already abundantly splashed... but it's a nice sexy story so far nonetheless. The references to Faroush fucking the beautiful women surrounding him in the royal court to while away the days during his political triviality were a very nice touch. Haswar's needs are elaborated on in pleasurable detail, and Urda's entrance is perfect. She's a lovely character and might have been included in a future fic had my attentions not been diverted towards Tierkreis... so I'm very much looking forward to the continuation!

Hey GoldenDragon.

I almost didn't read this fic. Not because of you, and not because of the writing. I almost didn't read it because while Suikoden V does indeed have some interesting women and porn potential, it and Tierkreis are just about the only two Suikoden games anyone seems to do anything of these days. So, naturally my interest was pretty low to read any sort of Suikoden V fic, especially one that's yet another of tons of the royal family when there's a whole roster of women that get ignored all the time if Suikoden V HAS to be the one written about instead of Suikoden I or II.

Eventually, I got myself to check it out, and I'm glad I did. Your writing incorporated storyline and had the characters (well, at least Urda) act as you would about expect their personalities to be, aside from that I doubt Haswar and Faroush would actually have sex. But, hey, I like incest as a theme and unlike with Rosa from FF4 I don't have to be concerned with whether or not the characters are being treated respectfully because the ones used don't have a heated history of fanboys trying to make them look bad. Plus there's nothing going on here like an out of character implication of a husband cheating on his wife or vice versa here. I actually read the descriptions here, whereas a lot of fics I end up skimming because it starts feeling like it's all same old same old. While I'm saying this, for some reason when you mentioned the "naked and exhausted Queen's Knights," I had this mental image of Alenia cursing the prince for screwing her in the ass but really enjoying every sore second of it.

In sum, good work. I hope that you do less used characters in the future, and moreso that you do some writing of Suikoden I and Suikoden II. They're sorely underrepresented at least lately. Especially Suikoden I.


Oh and sorry for not responding to your review to my fic. I didn't say anything to you through reviews because I thought for certain that I would have another chapter up soon enough that I could just respond to you in my author notes... instead it's almost two months since I've finished and uploaded any new writing. That's what happens when you have ideas in your head nonstop for one month that you can't do anything about. :P Thanks for telling me the Ayda bestiality wasn't too extreme, it makes me feel more comfortable in writing some unusual ideas and helps to let that creativity out. I have a nice chunk of the next chapter written, and I'm seriously considering just uploading what I already have as "part 1" of the next chapter since it's been so long since my previous chapter.

Well, I'm normally "eh" about your stories in general, mostly because you like to give your lead character a dick that could cause concussions if he made too many hip movements. For this story, though, I'm willing to ignore it, if only because Urda's reaction at the end was pretty damned hilarious.

That was a pretty interesting leap of logic Urda made, there, but, with the pornographic version of Suikoden V, it was completely in character. I don't know how I managed to like her character, and yet still think she's a complete bitch.