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for The Assassin’s Ordeal

by Dvorchak

person lostnight7
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update it seems like forever since the last one. You always seem to have me on the edge of my seat. I like how you encorparate some of the drell eidetic memory in this chapter as well. Thane slipping into and reliving the memories is another thing I found very ingenious to add upon the number of problems there facing. The only problem I have with this chapter is that the healing item is Medi-gel (well that and I’ve never heard of stim packs in mass effect at least but maybe I just can’t remember...) really good job besides that. Ps I love Thane and I can’t wait until Shepard shows up again hehe.