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August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Knowing the group's hierarchy and that everyone else accepts John as the leader, I personally can see Fred submitting to him, too. That might be just me, though XD;;;;
I keep coming back to reread this. Great story!
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February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AWESOME
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July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There are certain images, memories and phrases I've kept over the years. When I need to laugh, I take one out and have a good giggle. The image of Master Chief jack-hammering Kelly and shouting "INCOMING" has been added to the top five list. Thank you. Very very funny and very naughty story. Awesome.
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
One of the best Halo adult-fics out there!! You've got the Halo knowledge and character personality down to the last detail. It was like reading one of the books but with awesome sex! :P
Would love to see these guys at it again, thanks!! :D
Would love to see these guys at it again, thanks!! :D
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh maa god!! That was soo amazingly funny and beautiful! You should write more chapters! Damn I was laughing pretty much the whole time! They way the SPARTENS talked to each other was just to good. I think I love you, from were ever you live or who you are. Im going to marry this story becasue its just the amazing. So yes you are a fantastic writer with a good future head. Dont ever stop writing even if you never post a story on here again, keep it up your skill make me jealous!!
xoxo Lynxx
xoxo Lynxx
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The military jargon makes the whole scene a lollercoaster. Oscar Mike, indeed :D
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it...is there gonna be a sequel?
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Looking forward to updates.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like what you have here. Could use more foreplay before the real action, but still great. Perhaps you could expand further into more non-Spartans ladies of halo as well. Miranda and that new girl from the books Parisa would be great.
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's about time a story like this finally appeared. Very good. The thing that I could see improved upon is for a little more build up before the action. Perhaps a little more on noticing every facet of the others' bodies in a new way before tearing into each other. The only other problem was that you got ladies' hair wrong; Kelly had brown with blue streaks and Linda was the redhead. I hope you continue with this.