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for Tension

by NyItaliana

schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow.
i love this story.
we must have more.
make more soon.
or i will die.
XD.
jkjk.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Look, I like the premise, and the story has potential. But dude, if you're gonna write, learn how to use proper grammar and punctuation. Every little writing mistake is like a jarring note in a symphony, and if you make enough of them it ruins the music.