rate_review Reviews

Well this is still pretty interesting. Not sure where you're going with this. The sex scene was well written. Anora not being able to take any pleasure from it is a little cruel but I suppose thats what your going for. The woman from the first chapter was certainly allowed to enjoy herself but then again I suppose it could just be Anora not really wanting to go through with it in the first place. I do hope she starts to get some pleasure in the future.

Erlina seems to be acting a little odd. I wonder what's going on with her?

Liked how the Warden was sizeable enough to stretch her....

I like it so far!

I like this, but I also like Anora as a character so it's not surprise.

Well this is certainly an interesting start! Far too short but it is well written with a lot of good imagery. Based on the tags this looks like it could be very entertaining. There's not really enough here for me to properly review but I will assuredly give it the attention it deserves once you've written more.

I'm interested in who the woman was. With that accent it could be Leliana or perhaps Erlina? Or just someone random? I look forward to finding out!