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by Jodlet123

person chelsea-chee
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God, why'd you make this story so sad! She needed to live and even though I'm cool with Maria, I totally hated her in this story! Altair shouldn't have had a hard time choosing between the two: he shouldn't have loved Maria anymore! Ugh!

I loved the story, however, even though the ending killed me and made me cry. Such a wonderful job, though I do wish you made them happy by keeping them together. *le sigh...*

Thanxs! :) :p ;)
person Kumoriko
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*catches cookie and noms on it*

I started to cry alittle at the end of the chapter where Azurelle past. Good job and can't wait to read more of your stories =^.^=

~Kumoriko
person Kumoriko
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooo, somebodies in trouble.

Love this fic, keep up the good work =^.^=

~Kumoriko
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you weren't aiming for a MS, her name doesn't exactly set you off to a good start... Was Azurelle actually a name back there and then?