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Very nice! Cant wait to see who you'll bring in next!

I don't need to tell you how awesomet his is and hot and stuff, but I wanted to say that you did great with Zelenin's dream, its just the right mix of truth and bizarreness that makes it realistic as a dream

Good stuff again! I can't really think of much more to say, everything is written great as usual and is very hot, and I like the story you're developing with Zelenin. Other than that I don't know what more to say! Besides that I look forward a lot to each new chapter! Here's hoping for Alice, Lilith or Scathach, but it's all great either way!

I highly recommended this even if you are not familiar with the game. This is a great short sex story that cuts strait to the sex without feeling rushed. It is easy read thanks to clear visuals, distinct charters, and dialogue that has a natural flow to it.

Probably the strongest aspect of this story is that the sexual encounters are described using Zelenin’s sensations. Pixie’s chapter benefits the most from this as her actions mostly appeal to the fetish she represents, but Zelenin’s sensations make the experience more relatable and enjoyable for everyone.

As for the plot, it was a nice touch to see Zelenin’s actions drawing attention. Gossiping demons and the changing mood of Zelenin’s crewmates helped make the fictional world feel more real.

You continued this! Great! And it looks like your going to keep going! Super great! And its going to have more than one demon girl showing Zelenin a good time! Super fantastic great! I know you probably don't want any requests, butjust in case your mind is open, I'd love to see Alice, Lilith, and/or especially Scathach! Cant wait to see more!

I was the one who did your second review before. I was really happy to see a second chapter out for this! I was just worrying yesterday that this was a one-shot...I'm glad I was worrying for nothing! And this chapter was better than I had hoped...Hathor was very hot to read about, but fairy-human yuri is one of my favorites! Great job! I really hope you keep this going still, I like the story you're making about Zelenin opening up to "temptations" and of course the sex is great!

Oh and btw nice joke..."One of those fruit things" made me giggle. I hope everyone gets the Adam and Eve reference there.

This is really good and cool. Zelenin's a hotty so I approve. Will there be more? Maybe other ladies getting in on opening Zelenin's eyes? Or Hathor coming back to have fun with Zelenin when she becomes an angel? Tell me it doesn't end here! There's so few yuri stories for SMT, and nothing for Strange Journey! We need more!

I really, REALLY hope you plan to continue this.

Your writing absence hasn't dulled your skills at all. Great stuff!