rate_review Reviews

As good as almost all your works are, I think this is probably your very best story that I've seen on this website. I know it's been a while but I really, really hope that you'll some day grace us with a sequel. (A non-futa sequel, I hope. I know you're into that and you actually make it not so bad sometimes, but it's not my thing at all)

Very, very nice!!! I didn't think I could enjoy Zelenin porn so much. There are a few grammatical mistakes left here and there in the story, but nothing overwhelmingly distracting. It would pay to revise, though.

I read the whole thing, and my favourite chapter was definitely the Pixie one :) Thanks for writing!

That was great. It was a real treat to read and very hot, especially Part 4.
Thank you

this was wonderful, one of your best, i hope there are more to come but this was perfect

This was great from start to finish, just great, great, great! Thanks so much for making it. Your very talented!!

I'm really sad to see this end. You did such a great job with it, sex, plot, character development, and all. SMTSJ, and more importantly Zelenin, finally got some much needed much DESERVED fan attention, and it was of the best kind. So I'm sad to see this end, and no matter how unlikely you say it is, I'm going to hope real hard that you'll make a sequel some day. But whether or not you do, I just want to say, this is GREAT. You hit a level of quality with this lemon that is at the top of what adult fanfiction is capable of, up there with people like Take Me New and the mysteriously vanished Lemon Rangers. Few lemons here are as good as this one, hell, even YOU don't often manage to get a level of quality this good, and your certainly one of the best writers here. So big high-five to you! Thanks so much for this story, and I hope we'll see a continuation some day.

Wait...is that the end? It sounds like the end but it could also not be...please let us know if its really the end! Although I hope its not because this fic is great and just what this game and Zelenin needs!

DAMN that was great! Just, wow! You did Lilith, which is already total WIN, and it was awesome! And I really love the new Lust path you've made with Lilith at its head! The story of this fic is at least as good as the sex, maybe even more, and that's saying a lot! I really hope this won't be the last chapter, that you'll at least have 1 more that concludes whether or not Zelenin's chosen side wins (I hope it does!) Anyway this is great and it makes my day when you update it. Zelenin's the biggest hottie in the series and every chapter of a well written yuri fic about her is exactly what we all need.

And thanks for the cool bonus! I will totally use that Lilith next time I play

Great story. I think the pixie chapter was my favorite. :)

Thanks for the password, too!

Amazing serie! I'm surprised someone wrote Strange Journey fic. And it was very good fic (or rather cycle).