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hey cool idea and great fanfic! :D I have some ideas, how about Riku and Sora where sora has just come out of a shower with a towel rapped around him but trips over, with his towel falling off and him accidentally knocking Riku over and falling on top of him. Sora obviously naked gets hard, and embarrassed but Riku feeling Sora's erection is also incredibly horny and makes out with Sora leading to sex (maybe with Sora on top to go against the norm). Oh and how about a scene later on where Sora and Riku are fucking, and Roxas walks in leading to twincest, I have a scene in my head of Sora being fucked by Riku and sucking Roxas off. OH and later on a truth dare scene with a whole heap of campers leading to an orgy would be great, that is really cliche ^_^

Anyway those are just three ideas, I hope they are useful, I look forward to seeing the next chapter!