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streti this story is a shining example of why your the best.

Great story, Streti. I enjoyed the illusions to how sexually charged the environment is around Tsugu. Loved how you portrayed Sisuca. She's as fun as always. Really glad to see you included Eunice. I did find Hotupa's sudden addition jarring but not too much.

Really enjoyable. I hope to see more!

Streti, what impresses me most about your work is how you manage to keep the characters true to who they are even in the midst of raunchy, outlandish debauchery. Sisuca has a cute personality in the game, and you've stayed trued to that while simultaneously altering her to suit the sexy mood of the story. I believe that is what makes your stories so engaging and quite frankly so damn hot. It doesn't hurt that your writing appeals to my tastes on pretty much ever level, of course. But even if it didn't, I feel I'd still be able to appreciate it for what it is: superb narrative. Good show sir.

That being said, I feel that in a few minor cases, your pacing seems off balance. You are an excellent constructor of visuals. Sisuca and Zahra's standing 69, for example, is an overwhelmingly sexy concept. But it seemed like it was over as quickly as it began. Not to say I want you to overload on details, because that can really kill the momentum of a story. But I have confidence that you can find the right balance, as you almost always do in your stories. To the point where we're not like "wait who was fucking her?" but we're also not like "okay we get it he's hard." You usually always do, and it shows in this story as well with few exceptions.

Streti, you rule. Reading your stories is a treat.

What I wouldn't give for a Tiekreis fic without an overdose of cock.....

Streti, you're the best. This story is an excellent indicator of your progress as a writer. You've improved considerably, and reading your work is an absolute delight.

Classic Streti material!
Eunice sure got an eye for sperm quality.. :P but I think her butt needs another load to even out the amount on her bosom. I hope the continuation-screaming ending won't take too long to be concluded.

I'm not sure what it is but this somehow got the essence of your older fics.. like good clean and sunny… Love the wickedness and the brief yet purpose serving background story. Enjoyable story! Keep it up friend!

Awesome! Another Streti story. I enjoyed this a lot. I loved the mention of how common the creaking bed springs were coming from Tsugu's room. Also liked that they just left the door open for anyone to see. The whole nurse patient examination trope was a cool way of getting to some fun sex. I hope you write more.

One of the hardest things about reading Suikoden stories is remembering who all of the characters are, considering that there's a minimum of 108 for each game. (Tierkreis likes to fuck with us by having a few alternate universe characters as well).

Anyways, it was interesting. Sisuca is one of the goofiest characters in the Suikoden games (and that's saying something), so reading her is entertaining, and I laughed at the blase-ness everyone had with Tsugu's sexual antics. The problem I had, mostly, and I've already said this, is that I couldn't remember who the doctor and nurse were. It also took me a while to remember Hotuba, and his entrance into the orgy was a bit odd.

Oh, and cumshots. It's not a Streti without those.