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for Strangers with Cookies

by pirouette

person LL
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your Dalish has that "innocent sluttishness" about her that annoys the ever-loving hell out of me, but other than that your story is a good read. Kudos.
person Sterzie
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this. I would spawn your babies, if I was garuantied they would be able to write something as mindbogglingly entertaining as this; my brain jizzes every time. You've really brought Sten to life, and I love you for it. :3
person vera
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I completely adore what you're doing here. Your look into Sten's head is fascinating and I frankly can't wait to see more of it. Kudos for a fine idea executed with such a deft yet sensitive touch!
person roxfox62
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
fantastic..a favourite character of mine and you've nailed him perfectly...waiting with bated breath for more...thanx
person ALongcat
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A really good start. I feel like you've nailed characterizing Sten
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start, eagerly awaiting more!