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person Jesa
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, your perverted little soul has made my perverted little day. Never stop being awesome.
person Mysterious Angel-05
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Please contact me when you update. Thanks!
person Jesa
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bless your perverted little soul. I love your smut so much, even the "weird" stuff.

...who am I kidding. Especially the weird stuff. I'm a bad, bad person. Which is why I vote for option one, and hope you'll update soon.
person Connor
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi Robin. I cannot describe how much this made me blush, squeal and yearn for more. Absolutely fabulous wordplay and emotional impact and descriptive mastery =] I honestly cannot wait for you to continue. And I also sugest option 1, if not only because you want to write that, and will thusly write a better piece, but also because it'd be nice to see somethign original and imaginitive amoungst the sheer awesome of the piece.

<3 Keep it up xxx
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see both versions you have in mind. Yay for more sexy ottsel fic!I totally don't mind flooding the internet with this stuff *grin* In fact, I just posted my own, so, yeah.

I'm really enjoying this fic so far!
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please write more... Please?
person Branny
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Robin, I want you to finish this! lol
I love this story, surprised I didn't see it before!
Go with the first choice..this stuff is rather good, I knew you enjoyed writing it. <3
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
normally extra work is bad, but in this case i must admit i am curious to see how both versions will turn out :3
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Look like Dax really has it in for Jak this time. I wonder just how much stamina the ottsel boy has?

Great chapter (especially considering how fast you wrote it). I was impressed with your ability to add backstory and keep the two in character in the middle of a lemon without detracting from the action at all (seriously, people should learn from you). This could be the start of a new series for you, if you've got room on your already full platter.



Anyways, I'm gonna second both options. If you really have to choose though, go with the first. No reason to limit your creativity after all, and I love how you manage to keep your stories fresh despite having written so much already.


person Reva
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo!
After watching AF for a few months with nothing new, you came up with this! And since Chapter one i looked every evening if you continued it...and finally! Oh i cant wait to see the other Chapter(s).

It was really interesting to read, somehow..i could imagine those two doing something like that, even if it seems strange, it fits the characters.
Its also as well writing as any story you did, no matter how "weird" the content seemed to be, you brought it well to the reader!

I would like to see version one as well, but if we could get two versions...why not? >x3
(And again, English isnt my native language...forgive me if it sounds strange!)

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