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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I *must* say. You are one of the more talented writers I've had the pleasure of experiencing the work of, and I am extremely satisfied with the quality of your telling. I could only wish for more continuation of this tale, even after so long. Your particular brand of eroticism balanced against intrigue is very refreshing, and the attitude of the female lead is a nice contrast to the usual demure disposition that generally seems to be the norm. Also: HOT DAMN, Wrynn's attraction level; your knowledge on the subject is commendable. I've never found myself grinning so widely at this particular genre or enjoying such so much. I confess myself spoiled. Thank you, man.
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October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wheeee more new chapters~! still here still here and following you story x3 keep up the good work and update soon V^_^ though it seems we're bit slow, stuck in Wrath still lol
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September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!:D cant wait to see what you come up with next!
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful suprise to see this surface again. Please don't be a stranger.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a sad and sorry place to stop, MOAR please :p, I tease I'm as bad as anyone at leaving stories unfinished..but more please
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. Excellently written, and compelling. A good mix of everything that anyone who'd write anything on WoW should aspire to.
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ill make another review. :D
Its nice that you will attempt to update every friday, but don't rush yourself. :)
During the scene in the market district, there wasn't as much fighting as I would thought there would be, and towards the end, it seems a little.....interesting that Wrynn didn't try to kill the BElves.
But overall, albeit a little shorter than normal(Well, it was longer than the last chapter, so I should shut up), it was a pretty interestingly good chapter.
Its nice that you will attempt to update every friday, but don't rush yourself. :)
During the scene in the market district, there wasn't as much fighting as I would thought there would be, and towards the end, it seems a little.....interesting that Wrynn didn't try to kill the BElves.
But overall, albeit a little shorter than normal(Well, it was longer than the last chapter, so I should shut up), it was a pretty interestingly good chapter.
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such an original story! I love it! Could you put a link for where it's posted on ff.net? I want to keep reading it but I'm really bad at finding things hahaaha. I just wanted to *especially* say (I forgot last time), that I love the titles for your chapters, they are effortlessly clever, much like your writing :) I hope you keep going (and that your inspiration doesn't dry up but it's hard when you aren't playing the game, I know :( ) Anyway, keep up the good work and post a link if you get the chance. This one is too good to let go :)
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dude, I reeeeally like the intrigue you mix in with the porn. heh, I'm honestly never really sure how I feel about a d-bag like Wrynn (just my own personal opinion, mind!) banging someone as ultra-badass as Sylvanas, but there's just such a cool layer of cunning that kinda pulls him up to "her level" of intrigue or whatever. that's really a nice ploy there dude, to leave that so open to reader interpretation (right now at least). you did it before with Jaina too, and man I've been pondering that. I mean, if Jaina knows that the girl's body is possessed, did she just say something quietly as some sorta signal? is this Wrynn's way of "ferreting out" the information that the spy is after? haha because lawls that would be absolutely amusing... and you know, totally in line with his character, ahaha, hilarious. you gotta keep coming back to post more though dude, I wanna see where this goes! if Wrynn's either just got charisma and luck on his side, if Sylvanas really is the greatest infiltrator and spy in the world, some mixture of both or what! really, really dig what you're doing here man, this is probably the best mix of awesome porn and the WoW leaders I've ever seen.
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the first review I've written, so I apologize if its not......well thought out. xD
Overall, this is VERY well done, sex or no sex, a good fanfic is always appreciated(though for here, I would prefer it to be a bit erotic). I thought it was just going to be another WoW story about sex ext.
So I started reading it(because the description interested me a little) and found it to be much better than I thought it would be(No offense). From reading the other reviews, I can see I am not the only one who enjoys this. So please continue to update it. I understand that it takes a while to make a good chapter with edits and all(and that you updated it very recently).
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GOOD JOB!! :D
Overall, this is VERY well done, sex or no sex, a good fanfic is always appreciated(though for here, I would prefer it to be a bit erotic). I thought it was just going to be another WoW story about sex ext.
So I started reading it(because the description interested me a little) and found it to be much better than I thought it would be(No offense). From reading the other reviews, I can see I am not the only one who enjoys this. So please continue to update it. I understand that it takes a while to make a good chapter with edits and all(and that you updated it very recently).
TL;DR
GOOD JOB!! :D