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for Something Old, Something New

by Tater-Chips

person Ashley Brown
schedule January 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really feel sorry for Bowser and I love this story.
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow really hot! I can't wait till he's more in control the next time. I just gotta hear his deep, seductive voice....
person guzhead
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Please continue and have Koopa knock up Peach!
person Spleef
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely digging this smarter King Koopa. Keep up the good work, update soon please.
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 2. Wow, great work! Some grammar issues here and there. It's also kinda poor to have scene changes inside of a prargraph, or have a scene change without any indication, such as a series of lines or something. otherwise, nice work!
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I'm VERY happy about this story and the direction it's taking. It's a unique look and I really like it. I totally can't wait for the next chapters.