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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I loled at that last chapter, probably shouldn't have... It was nice to see another update. Hope to see one soon.
P.s you should think about writing a Carter x Kat fic.
P.s you should think about writing a Carter x Kat fic.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha weird, but very interesting as well. Wheres that chapter 4 you said there would be? Keep up the amazimg work. Hope you one day come back to this site to finish this story!
xoxo Lynxx
xoxo Lynxx
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is truly a great fan fic, love the way it works. Perhaps you could do something with other Reach characters, like have Cortana re-write Dot's programs (in case you don't know, Dot is Noble Team's AI) or get off to something happening to Kat. MAybe even throw in some Miranda in a weird mother-daughter-psuedo-daughter orgy. Regardless, great job, keep up the good work, and please update as soon as you can.
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omfg I have to say, THE POEM WAS AWESOME! Seriously why did you say its a one off thing? IT WAS GREAT! SERIOUSLY GREAT! Nothing better than a nice rhyme to pass the time. ^.^
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cool ryhming Chapter. Hoping for updates.
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quite original. I agree with the previous reviewer that you should have some way of Cortana and the Chief finally getting it on. Also, a bit about Doc Halsey feeling guilty or jealous of her creation actually getting John would be a great finish
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The only flaw I can find is that there isn't more of this story being posted. Also you might want to find a way for Masterchief and Cortana to actually get together. Also think covenant AIs, helpless AIs.