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for Dark Desires

by ParadoxdelaPaladino

person Ryku
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I for one would just adore to see more!!! ^_^ This was really interesting. I can't get enough.
person ME
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ya know, I've read alot more graphic things on fanfiction itself...This was great, but not as dirty as some of the stuff I have read, you should post this on fanfiction, it'll fit right in.
person rayvne
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so want a part three!!! Malik has to make sure that Altair is ok...Wink wink
person Robert
schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As a descendent of the real Robert de Sablé , like many french, its a bit disturbing ( haha ) , but well written .
Robert de sablé is written with a "é" .
" Vous êtes vraiment beau, assassin . " beau is the masc . belle is the fem .But its ok, good work ;
person C
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I would say another chapter is a must. Really well written xD
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heheh!!! There needs to ba a "Hey! I saved you from nearly dying, and you're awake and not bleeding to death, so let's fuck!" Malik and Altair chapter!! :P
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice :D
i found this on FF.net and it was awesome
i think you should add some alty/malik :D