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April 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i loooove this fanfic so much, when I started reading it and still is just blows my mind!!
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have single handedly made me love this pairing.
I'm just so bummed that there's been no update for a while.
I'm afraid this is going to turn into one of those chapter fics I fall in love with, only to have any hope of seeing it finished crushed by the author's waning interest.
Please continue this, I'd love to see it finished~
I'm just so bummed that there's been no update for a while.
I'm afraid this is going to turn into one of those chapter fics I fall in love with, only to have any hope of seeing it finished crushed by the author's waning interest.
Please continue this, I'd love to see it finished~
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hurray new chapters, I'm a very very happy bunny right now
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is just mindblowing amazing. I'm amazed at how in character both Norman and Blake are...I guess the sexual tension was pretty high in the game, haha. But seriously, your writing style is fantastic and I love your plot. PLEASE keep writing, for my sake :P
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole thing from start to here in like a week, so behind on ym uni work but I REGRET NOTHING!
I'm loving this, Jayden was always my favourite in heavy rain and I love how you write him, gah I just wanna give him a big hug
I'm loving this, Jayden was always my favourite in heavy rain and I love how you write him, gah I just wanna give him a big hug
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe there are so reviews! Must be down to fandom size.
I just read the whole thing in one go (5am here now, urgh), and I absolutely love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for posting it!
I just read the whole thing in one go (5am here now, urgh), and I absolutely love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for posting it!
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very impressed with this. While I never really shipped this particular pairing, I did recognize the dynamic for it and the way you've laid it out just works. The characters stay true to their original voice without ever being ooc. I hope you'll update this soon!
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice read.
/Very/ nice.
I like how you continue the story along with Heavy Rain and you stay fairly within its reality.
Please write more? :3
/Very/ nice.
I like how you continue the story along with Heavy Rain and you stay fairly within its reality.
Please write more? :3
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read it all together and I didn't have enough!
A 100 hits and nobody reviewed?! I cannot understand…
The idea is brilliant since it allows absolute freedom to the author and promises so many possibilities for the readers. Your explanation of the concept of ARI's reality was smart and helped making what is happening plausible (fiction-wise for sure…). Your characterization of Blake is true to his real personality and I loved it. His justification of his homosexual sudden urges was so logical while kept him in character. I am not sure though about Norman since he seemed very broken and submissive during the sex scene. You should have at least made him fight a bit. I guess my impression was due to the fact that you narrated this scene without getting us inside Norman's head and get a glimpse of his justification.
So far, I think you are doing a great job and I urge to continue.
A 100 hits and nobody reviewed?! I cannot understand…
The idea is brilliant since it allows absolute freedom to the author and promises so many possibilities for the readers. Your explanation of the concept of ARI's reality was smart and helped making what is happening plausible (fiction-wise for sure…). Your characterization of Blake is true to his real personality and I loved it. His justification of his homosexual sudden urges was so logical while kept him in character. I am not sure though about Norman since he seemed very broken and submissive during the sex scene. You should have at least made him fight a bit. I guess my impression was due to the fact that you narrated this scene without getting us inside Norman's head and get a glimpse of his justification.
So far, I think you are doing a great job and I urge to continue.