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Hey, this story is pretty entertaining. The newest chapter with Jeane was my favorite but I wish she'd gotten to mess with the people around her more. I liked that she was getting fucked and licked while this was all going on. I hope there's more of her in the future.

A chapter with Jeane! I enjoyed your take on Jeane though I was up in arms when you described her with small breasts but then I saw the bit about it being an illusion. Not sure why Jillia isn't effected though.

Loved that part right in the beginning where Jeane uses the charm rune to make Leona desire to eat her pussy. That Jeane was getting fucked and also licked by Raura was great.

I did think it was a tease with that part with her influencing Jillia to fuck a dog and then pulled back. Bad Leona!

I liked that mention of Queen Arshtat as well as Johan. Those are just my initial impressions, I might review more thoroughly later.

In any event, you should definitely keep writing. You have a distinctive style.

This is a pretty interesting story. I'm enjoying seeing your take on suikoden II. There aren't enough of those one here. I enjoyed Sierra the most so far. LIke Lucia the second most. Rather uninterested in Jilia but that's okay. Can't wait for more!

“The light, agitated crease in the Karayan's brow wasn't a very positive sign for truth-telling. "We should hurry to the shop, word spreads quickly when it reaches Stallion's pointy ears."” I like this line just because it’s a casual one that brings alive the community of the castle.

Love the addition of Sierra as a sexy ‘cum-pire’. Liked how she used her familiarity with blood to coax him to a superior erection. “Sierra slid his length in her mouth, down the runway set by her sharp vampire fangs.”
Like this line in particular.

“…his sex-sire” Nice…

The addition of Milia along with Sharon as a baby was very interesting.

I find your story pretty entertaining and I can’t wait to see in what other ways you will sexually twist the characters that we know and love.

Nice to see Suikoden II get some more attention, with a new, different perspective. It seems to pick up in the second chapter, so I'm interested in what you have in store for the continuation.

A more meaty chapter! This was pretty hot. Especially loved the part where Lucia described a Karayan leader's duty. That deserves a story in itself! I look forward to your next chapter.

Your story is a very interesting one so far. You've put a lot of detail in it. The world of Suikoden really comes alive in your words. I wasn't turned off by the animal action with Ayda in fact I was hoping Lucia would get her turn as well with her haughty attitude. I must say that I did find the bit with Millie to be rather offputting. But to each his own. I look forward to your next chapter.

I enjoyed this a lot. It has a lot of potential. Very descriptive really brought the castle and its people alive. I'm thoroughly interested in the mystery of the Pantsu brigade. Especially enjoyed Oulan's presence and how she has fangirls who love to be ravished by her. Can't wait to see where you go with this.