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by shade333

schedule February 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hi do you do commissions?

person JayDee
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great stab at a zombie sex scene. I think a bit more length and detail might be beneficial, but very entertaining as is. Good work!
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You need paragraph breaks, pal.

Otherwise, pretty funny.