rate_review Reviews

Both Nero and Dante being paired up with your own female characters is one thing despite Nero already having a girlfriend. Fine. For some reason you think that you can come up with better kickass female devil hunters than what the series already offers. Whatever though I doubt you will succeed.

However what actually caused me to write this angry review is what you talked about right in the author's notes. This is exactly why I hate Dante/OC and Nero/OC pairings. They are written as an excuse to wither bash or leave out the women of Devil May Cry. Dante turning his back on his two partners. Good job. You already ruined Dante by having him behave like a heartless jerk. Ditto with Nero leaving Kyrie. Let me guess she cheats on him or some other weak excuse to make her into a bitch. Out of character is putting it lightly. I don't know who either of these guys are because they sure don't act like the Dante and Nero everyone knows.

Dante leaving Trish in hell is out of character and stupid not to mention goes agaisnt canon.

More importantly without Trish's help, he would not have successfully sealed off Mundus and thus would have died. So how does he survive that battle on his own? I haven't even begun to attempt to read this and you already have a massive plot hole that is too big to ignore. And you have to address this since clearly this story is taking place after DMC4.

In any case,going by how old the other reviews are,this story should have stayed dead.

I would love to read more of this~ hope you're still working on it.

thats it? upload soon! i just started playing dmc4 and i kicked ass and i wanna know what happens. they both need to get laid and what happened with kirye and nero, they were suposed to be together 4ever lol.

Well...I wasn't sure if I liked this at first, but I must say I am very interested in seeing where this is going. I'm not sure if english is your first language, as it seems there are multiple errors here and there. It just makes the story a little harder to read and I wold recommend finding a beta.

I'm not bashing: far, far from it. I really do like the plot that you seem to be laying, and am hoping for an update soon.

The advice I have for you (from writer to writer) is work on grammar, and find a beta reader.

Good luck and I really hope you don't think I'm being rude.

Mandy

love it!! lol more more ^.^

I love it Sissy. It's coming along great. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hugglebears and loves.

Not sure what to think of the story so far but it shows promise, keep up the good work.

I really like this story. Can't wait to see more.

super good! i cant wait for more! ^.^

this is great so far! though im pretty sure nero is just a demon made to
look like dante .. like trish... and not his brother....... sorry im not trying to correct you or anything i like the story a lot!