schedule
July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
pretty hot
schedule
June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the best "first time" sex scenes I've ever read. Beautifully written. :)
schedule
April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read about half of these many small stories you've posted in the past weeks, and I'm finally stopping to review one.
This was so good. The three main characters together is a pairing that's largely ignored for some reason I can't understand, and when it is approached, well, I've yet to see one that turns out well.
Besides this one. Your writing style, while impressive in all of the fics I've read so far, really shines in this one. The tension and awkwardness is described so well that it's practically tangible. I felt that kind of observant awkwardness just reading some of it, which is a very good thing, in this case. As for the sex, even though it was written as a clumsy first time between teens, it was still miles ahead of lots of other smut scenes I've read. I honestly cannot pick out one thing I didn't like about this.
I haven't seen any of your kingdom hearts fics continued longer than one chapter, but if there's any more to this one, I eagerly await it. If not, it stands just fine on it's own. Great job.
This was so good. The three main characters together is a pairing that's largely ignored for some reason I can't understand, and when it is approached, well, I've yet to see one that turns out well.
Besides this one. Your writing style, while impressive in all of the fics I've read so far, really shines in this one. The tension and awkwardness is described so well that it's practically tangible. I felt that kind of observant awkwardness just reading some of it, which is a very good thing, in this case. As for the sex, even though it was written as a clumsy first time between teens, it was still miles ahead of lots of other smut scenes I've read. I honestly cannot pick out one thing I didn't like about this.
I haven't seen any of your kingdom hearts fics continued longer than one chapter, but if there's any more to this one, I eagerly await it. If not, it stands just fine on it's own. Great job.