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for Revered and Reviled

by sinnerman

schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

A race, and an escape, exciting. I needed popcorn. Had pistachios instead.
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love lost still. Sadness prevails. A truth revealed, and ignored.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four.
The enemy always says the think he thinks will effect you the most. A fighter as skilled would not have let it throw them.

Normally I hate fight scenes. This one was very readable.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five.
Sometime the evil is inviting, it draws you in. I know you enjoy doing that. You haven't captured me yet.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six.

Lessons are hard learned. There is darkness here. I felt the touch of the darkness. It was chased by the light.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Seven.
Lies. The one thing that has the power to destroy all.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think I was tortured more.
The loss of love.
I cry for it.
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far I find the story interesting. Collecting eggs to avoid a trait, while furthering a bloodline, very intriguing.
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two.
I like the snowball fight. I will admit I have started the game, but haven't finished. I found the secret longing to be very drawing.
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three.
Longing, sex. What's not to like. I take it he was captured...*glances at notes*... do I need to find comics? Is this in the game?