rate_review Reviews

Holy hell- what an invention! How much is it and where can I get one? LOL!

This was awesome... I never thought much about a Jack/Miranda pairing but that was hot.

Great job! :D

I thought it was done quite well myself.

If I may offer a suggest for a second chapter maybe have Miranda get a turn with the toy, hmm?

As horribly unlikely it would be for those two to have a canon relationship, I found this story to be wonderful and you made the pairing work in its own way. You cannot deny that both of them are obviously quite comfortable in their sexuality and I was surprised that Jack was not a romance option for a female Shepard. That would be one of my future projects and this little piece will serve as good inspiration. The science fiction dildo is always an excellent element to include in lesbian scenes and the Salarian explaining how it was supposed to work was refreshing. Shepard being a drunken moron was pretty funny too, but next time he should really bring Grunt along for the ride and get into a good old fashion bar brawl. I enjoyed your story and hope to see more from you.

A great oneshot i liked it and i hope to read more of your work soon and heres two ideas oneshots.
Idea 1

Plot: After ME2 Tali, Shepard and Garrus decide to find Ashley and make her pay for not helping them in their mission on Horizon.

pairing opitions: Garrus/Ashley, Tali/Male Shepard and Male Shepard/Aahley or a foursome.

Idea 2

plot: Set after Raising the Bar where Tali returns and how Shepard welcomes her back.

pairings Tali/Shepard with some Miranda/Jack if you want to add it.