rate_review Reviews

Yes, yes, I know, not good form posting anonymously. However. I've been reading these forums for a goodly while now, and this is the first time I've felt and urge, nay, compulsion, to rate a story, let alone review it. So, some constructive criticism: The story flows well, and although the pairing is a bit odd to say the least, I can see the logic behind it. Plus, there's a certain rough justice being meted out by the turnabout at the end, so it's all good.

I would also like to see a follow-up chapter to this, because a Legion/Tali pairing has a lot of potential, and might even lead to (dare I say it), plot.

more! more! more! more! MORE! XD

omg @ raxz
your so right. i hate that.
its in the summary. it wasnt a surprise. no one was lured into reading this story under false pretenses.
ugh. i hate that.

To Lynna. B

I am sorry to have to say this, but I think your comment is downright unfair to H After B.

I do NOT know this author personally nor I think he/she needs me to defend him/her. I do not wish to offend anyone, but I could not keep silent either.

Lynna. B, what I do not understand, you have been here for a while, you have written many high rated fictions too.

You surely understand what N/C means. It is always about forced sex. You do know too that the story is going to be about Tali and Legion. They are there in the summaries. Clear, as crystal to whoever play ME2. And yet, you decided to read the story, and write a negative review about it afterwards. You are an adult yet you expect other writers to babysit you? Absurd.

I do not against negative reviews IF they help the author to write better. Besides, as a writer yourself, you must have known already about the hardship of writing every single story and the joy of reading encouragement or constructive criticism.

However, what you did was like someone with a lactose intolerance buying dairy products and sending a complain letter to the company afterwards. It is an unhealthy attitude, it will not bring you anything positive in life.

Please think about it, sorry if I was too harsh.

*jawdrops*

I am speechless. This...is...awesomeness...

Please write more of Tali/legion story.

Dunno... this is a rape story, nothing else. Forced sex is never good and Tali/Legion is just bizarre. Definitely NOT my cup'o'tea. :/ Wish I had avoided this atrocity. Eww.

that was.... hot to say the least.
i love the interaction between legion and Tali.
legion just seems sexy all of a sudden.
taking control over her suit and forcing pleasure on her.
Mmmm. now THATS a good read. *wink*
thanks hun.
please make more.
dont even wait for anyone else to say it.
just for me cuz u love me. lol

read this on masskink. I want this to continue soo much.