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for That Blurred Line

by sablebliss21

person max
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... so awesome.
person Elyssa Brown
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hopped on over from ff.net because I felt it was seriously lacking in quality Shenko smut. Your story has more than satisfied my craving. It was romantic, sexy, and angsty all at the same time. Definitely my favorite combination. Now hurry up with that sequel!
person J
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story, I hope you continue. :)
person isaantia
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic work. Although I have to say "ewww" to the worm, it was used for maximum literary effect. Brilliant.

While playing through the first time I had hoped Shepard would randomly run into Kaidan again on the Citadel. You made my rather vanilla fantasy of that much more steamy! Thanks!
person Kyriene
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thought it was awesome, great story fits exactly what should have happened. Hope it satisfied the muse :). Thank you again for a wonderful story
person Michelle7
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic...reminds me of how much I wish we had the option in game of being able to continue to romance Kaidan after Horizon...thanks goodness for fanfic...again...great job.
person jillyfae
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was spectacular. Gorgeous, emotional, sexy without being tacky... and I think the moral I learned from the story is that too much tequila may be good for you. My husband will probably need to thank you for that one. ^_~
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, no reviews on this one yet? People are so shy to review on this site...

I love what you're doing here. The interaction with Kaidan was not enough in ME2. Here's hoping for some wild, drunken sex!! :D
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo i like it. alot.
kaidan and carth are such sexy characters.
wanna know why? because of raphael sbarge's voice. *fans self* oh my.
makes me warm and tingly. lol

more chapters pleaseee!!! XD
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely sexy. I will be recommending this fic to the Kaidan fans on the Bioware Social site. The raw emotion of the love scene was incredible.

I'm glad that you mentioned their apparent lack of protection. A lot of people will write a sex scene where protection/withdrawl isn't used and never even mentioned.

The morning after for these two is going to be very bittersweet.