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Its a bird, its a plane?! No its starcrossed with a random tackle *cu-thunck!* in an effort to inspire you.

P.S Not to say, but I still haven't had time to update mine in awhile, so this is a moment of calling the kettle black >.>
Oh well, still need good stories to NOM *hands out chocolate for more motivation*

P.S.S Random reviews at odd hours usually turn out strange <.< Oh shiny...waaaaaaiiit nooo put down the x-box controller and animate...nooo bad girl...*continues to argue with herself and wanting to play mass effect 2 rather than finish school work*

*picturing Shepard shotting Garrus and finds herself over come with giggles*

Btw, lovely chapter, I can't wait till the next one!

*hands out more foodies*

*giggles* I can't wait to see what Shepard does when she finds out about the devious little plot being played out around her. *hands off more food* Now, should I sleep after such a lovely update or finish modeling this damn room. >.> That's it, this calls for drinks! Your choice!

...Oh goodness, there's nothing more terrifying than a gaggle of girls with a mission. Especially when it involves boys. Poor Shepard. May she pray for mercy.

I kind of feel bad for Jacob; you know, being used to get Garrus jealous. Not that it's Shepard's fault because she didn't plan it, but Jack and Miranda are kind of nasty for doing it. Of course, I'd expect no less from Jack. And I'd feel worse for Jacob but I get the inkling that he'll end up with Miranda "ghetto booty" Lawson so at least that's a consolation.

"The Turian swallowed hard, suddenly grateful that he'd opted to wear his armor instead of any light weight fabric that would show off his growing...problem" Oh Garrus, we love you and your spontaneous boners. Keep it up, big boy. ...Literally! ;)

Well, tone down the obscenities (I know some of the characters in ME2 are swearing, but don't let them talk continously like that, it's really ruining your story) and you're mostly on the right trip for a nice story. Turning heroines into virgins or putting them in slutty dresses is a really bad idea though, and totally overused in fics per se. The 'first time' isn't a sacred experience. It's ugly, painful and awkward and most women tend to be afraid of it and are so bitchy they put their parter completely off. Aside from that, it's decently written, but it could have been a lot better if you wouldn't rush your story so much. Maybe only concentrating on the romance part between Garrus and your renegade Shepard would have been better? Just wondering.

Jack and Thane. Together. As a couple. ...Playing chess.

Huh.

Never would've considered that pairing before. Now I think I kind of like that. Weird. O_O

And I love Awkward!Garrus, bottle of conditioner and all. ...Though, why he has a bottle of conditioner I'll never understand. Unless e uses it exclusively for alone time. ...Or he likes his fringe to be silky smooth.

And I love Mordin too. Oh, him and his embarassing conversations about relationships. You know, for a species without a proper sex drive he seems way too interested in everyone else's sex drives. xD Lol. But that's why we love him.

This is such a nice story- good set up, plenty of places it can go, looking forward to reading more :D

*plops down right beside the author* Alright, you have me interested. *hands her some food* Please continue this story and I'll continue to give you foodies...somehow through the computer screen. *sigh* Might as well get back to finishing my final and stop procrastinating with good stories (like yours).

Pffft! The ending killed me. First, it was all adorable because Shepard's asleep and Garrus is feeling all protective of her and then Urz curls up on the bed beside her and it's a very "D'awww"-worthy moment. ...And then Garrus ruins the innocence and sweetness of the moment by thinking about masturbating. xD Lol. I knew there was a reason why I loved Garrus.