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Oh mate, you have to write more. This is fantastic. 5 stars.

I enjoyed your fic alot. Good characterizations, good sex. Very good sex. Truthfully, no-one knows if these two would ever get together. Their sexuality is never explored in the games and they could both be lesbians or bisexual for all we know. Cute scenes with Rebecca's defensiveness about her age. With Sheva's background (raised in a criminal gang) I could certainly see her being turned off towards men. Well, I would love to see more. It would be interesting if Rebecca remained the sexual aggressor in their relationship (because it's not what people expect). Impressive first effort. Hope you don't disappear as many first writers do.
SailorNemesis