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by Badpie24

person Agravain
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, well written, well thought out and definitely captures both characters well. Well done! Moar.
person Kabraxal
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I've died and gone to heaven. The tension through the entire scene was exquisite and the moment where she falls asleep and he simply lays there with her and fully admits his love to himself... tender and graceful. Also, I am glad to see another story for the beautiful Ash.