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Great story so far! Hope you finih it!

This is honestly one of the best ME stories I've read so far. Very deep and I like the swapping around, giving us more and more peaks into Shepard and Miranda's heads. Shepard is tragically human, how he didn't just automatically fall into line after coming back like he did in the game is excellent. Looking forward to more.

excellent story really enjoying how your telling the story from two perspectives very interesting keep up the good work

Still digging this, I'm glad to see you're still writing. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you handle Jack and Miri's interactions. I tend to enjoy them as friends, antagonists, or even lovers, so I'm curious to see where you take them.

(Also liking the way you're handling Miri's thoughts, it's interesting to see how differently taken from how she sees the goings-on.)

I know you've mentioned before that updates wouldn't be on regular basis (believe me the wait is worth it) but I'm wondering since its been a while since the last update if you plan on continuing this wonderful story?

I really love the way you write Miranda. Just when I feel like I'm ready to kind of write her off you publish a new chapter that makes her sympathetic and beautiful. Thanks. :) And I love this story. Even though its ripping my heart out over my girl, Ash it's doing it so well.

Hey,
Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this so far.
-The Sole Survivor interaction...Oh my god, I wish I could do this in game....why Bioware why?!
-Following that the Ashley mention by Miranda and how Shepard reacted....great! (though I am kind of sad she is dead in your story)
As was said before there are not many (if at all) MShep/Miranda stories on this site so this is a plus to see one so far.
Cant wait for an update!

I love flashback chapters! It was a nice little break from Miranda's psyche, and getting to know your Shepard better. Ch 8 was very touching, Kabby :)

Excellently written story, always a plus to see m!shep.

Good work, i look forward to future chapters.

Hey Griffon Sabe I've got a crazy idea for a future chapter. What if Tali actually recognized the symptoms of Shepard's depression on Freedom's Progress and she decided to join him much earlier than expected to keep an eye on him because she's worried about him. And maybe when they're alone Tali could be an amateur counselor who's trying to get him to open up...But I suppose that could work just as well with Kelly Chambers, who happens to be a professional counselor but in the game it seems like Kelly's yeoman job takes precedence over her counselor job.