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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quite a good story, although you may want to look at chapter 3 again. I don't know what does it but thatchapter is a mess on my comp, seeing as the following is repeated in front of every sentence:
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I don't know why this has happened, but I do know that I would greatly appreciate it if you took the time to fix it. If you can fix it, ofc. :)
Other than that, it was a rather entertaining read. :)
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I don't know why this has happened, but I do know that I would greatly appreciate it if you took the time to fix it. If you can fix it, ofc. :)
Other than that, it was a rather entertaining read. :)
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October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very Kinky!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. As another reviewer mentioned the main problem with the story is that it is in script form. Typos and grammar errors are present, but I've seen a lot worse from other fanfic writers. I do like the pairing- something that's almost never done. I also really enjoy that you reveal that Tails has two cocks in chapter 2. That is also something that almost no one ever does, yet it suits Tails, after all, if he has a pair of tails, why not a pair of cocks? I hope that there's more to the story and that you do make attempts at improving.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good fic. It was written in Script format, and not a lot of people are too fond of such. It also had a lot of typos and grammatical errors, but nothing which can't be fixed. But, it was still good, interesting, and had a really nice romance between two characters one normally wouldn't see together. I look forward to future chapters from this.