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for Hallelujah

by megadeth425

person SteadyxSword
schedule February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hell, I thought it was pretty good, and I'd say it really couldn't be any longer (unless you actually wrote out all of her prayers) so, It's perfect the way it is.
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Neat little fragment. Not much else I can say about it, though.
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, nice. Coulda used a bit more length, but what can ya do.