rate_review Reviews

Pretty good. A bit rushed, but it was amusing and well done. I hope you post the second chapter. I think it would go over well.

Very....gory.... o.o
And yet I still want to know what happens next.
As for your description of the second chapter, I just had to laugh because of the amount of times I've read fics like that. However, I still think it could work. Not in a sappy 'i just realised I love you with all my heart PH' kind of way but... let's put it this way, James is twisted in the head and PH is a representation of all his repressed urges. I wouldn't be surprised if he was actually some kind of kinky masochist XD

I liked it. :D It was brutal, but in a delicious kind of way. Not so delicious for James,though. xD

Hey I really liked this story. I would actually like to read the second part you had in mind if you had it.

Sorry forgot to put my email Its Havocs_Shadow@Live.com incase you decide to put it up.

There was a WALL here, but it's gone now.

Call me obscene, but I thought that was pretty funny. Not in a bad way, either. I just keep thinking about how men getting their prostate checked out, must feel like, and why they won't ever want to bend over again.

Did his ass heal up enough, for that second chapter? I wonder how many Med Kits he had to sit on.