rate_review Reviews

Wow, what an awesome story! I read the entire 13 chapters in one sitting, it was so good. The plot was intriguing, the sexy times were either evil, sweet or kinky and each time the message you intended came across clearly. I wish I'd found this story what, 6 years ago when it was written so I could encourage you to write more! I really enjoyed it and the trip back to vanilla was too good. I remember being level 23 and looking at pally's in their shiny armour on their glowing horses and being so jealous hahaha. I didn't think I'd ever get a mount, now I have so many I have an achievement for it lol. So anyway, I'm so glad I stumbled across this story - and I hope you get this review and that it encourages you to write more lol! I love dwarfs and yours are even more lovable. NIce work! :D (P.S. Am I the only one who reads this and misses Vanilla?lol)

This was an amazing story, and I loved reading every chapter of it. I hope to read more from you in the future.

On a curious note, I was wondering if you were a freelance writer. If so, could I bother you with some ideas?

I enjoyed this story very much from beginning to end. I myself play World of Warcraft and have always made my characters dwarves. Dwarves get very little love from fiction writers, usually they are at best an important side kick with a flimsy story fleshed out for them and used within a story to provide the muscle for the action parts. I sent the link to this story to my wife via email so that she could read it herself at her leisure on her own computer at home or work, in the hopes that she too will come to enjoy the stories on this website and stories on others as much as I have come to do.

I just finished reading this, and I have to say I am impressed. I love how you were able to explain some game mechanics in a way that would make sense in a "real" world, and the plot you wove through the story is fascinating and creative. The only problem I had was when you occasionally referenced Fury as a "mage". Not sure if you meant a general magic user, but it gave me a bit of confusion a few times. Anyhow, all told, I think this was excellently written and would like to see ore work from you in the future. Good work! =D