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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awhh....How long is Wizard's punishment going to be, I wonder. I can't help but to be curious about all the things that Witch might let Hikari in on now. Did she make up her mind, by the way? I can't wait to see some serious fluffiness fly soon! I'm really enjoying your story and you're doing a great job on keeping the characters believable. I can't wait for the next chapter! Good work hunny! I might be doing some artwork for ya soon if you keep it up!
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O_O....Wow...Awesomely done, deary. Please oh please post a new chapter soon! I can't wait to read what's next! GAH! I hope Wizard's going to be alright!
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was definitely worth the wait. I love how you made Wizard's trip to the astral plane. And how the spirits wanted to play with him upon his arrival was certainly cute....It's hard to imagine him playing in that sense though. I hope you post again soon! That wait was near torture. Lol. Good job and keep up the great work hun!
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Poor Hikari! poor Wizard! Please tell me that you'll be setting everything to rights soon! I would like to see some more fluff from those two!
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon! I've been watching this story and can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm hanging in suspense here...I need more!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, I THOUGHT it was a dream! :D
That was very entertaining. I just love the way you write Wizard.
Keep it up!
Take care.
That was very entertaining. I just love the way you write Wizard.
Keep it up!
Take care.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been playing HM: AM nonstop for about a week now and this story kinda spurred me on to find out what the wizard's real name is...You're doing a fantastic job on keeping the characters believable and I loved how you said 'Like his heart was a spring flower blooming for the first time.'. That was a wonderful piece of imagery there and it really made the character feel more human. Keep up the great work.
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good...lol...I can imagine Finn turning that color red as well. You're doing a good job, keep up the good work.
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this.
I'm actually pursuing the Harvest King in HM:AP at the moment but I'll have to do Wizard too. I really like your interpretation of his personality. (And I hope you include a scene where he reveals to Hikari his real name. ^^)
I like how you mentioned a few of the game mechanics and activities. That was fun to read.
By the way, what does Hikari look like? I'm curious. So far, her personality matches the original meaning of her name really well (not that its matching really matters, but I love it nonetheless). Very caring and kind. You can't get much more "light" and shining than that. ^^
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.
(Please continue!)
Good luck and Take care of yourself.
~~Shiya64
I'm actually pursuing the Harvest King in HM:AP at the moment but I'll have to do Wizard too. I really like your interpretation of his personality. (And I hope you include a scene where he reveals to Hikari his real name. ^^)
I like how you mentioned a few of the game mechanics and activities. That was fun to read.
By the way, what does Hikari look like? I'm curious. So far, her personality matches the original meaning of her name really well (not that its matching really matters, but I love it nonetheless). Very caring and kind. You can't get much more "light" and shining than that. ^^
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.
(Please continue!)
Good luck and Take care of yourself.
~~Shiya64