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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the story!!!
I loved fun and games, it was written so well and easily became one of my all-time favorites and this sequel follows the same tradition...
I loved fun and games, it was written so well and easily became one of my all-time favorites and this sequel follows the same tradition...
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Pretty colors..."
That was a perfect conclusion for such a wonderful story. I'm kinda sad to see it end as well though. You did a really great job with the characterization (as always), still managing to tie all of the previous chapters together for the finale. And such inordinate amounts of fluff! I still feel warm and fuzzy inside ten minutes after reading it.
I liked the way you had them being nervous about each other in the beginning; really fits with the way they acted in Fun and Games. How you manage to keep all your storylines separated I'll never know. You had, what, 4 lines of continuity in the works (one now completed)? And the subtle differences in each of those series is what keeps people reading and enjoying all of your work.
Anyways, happy holidays, and looking forward to new ventures coming next year! Thanks for working so hard for us!
That was a perfect conclusion for such a wonderful story. I'm kinda sad to see it end as well though. You did a really great job with the characterization (as always), still managing to tie all of the previous chapters together for the finale. And such inordinate amounts of fluff! I still feel warm and fuzzy inside ten minutes after reading it.
I liked the way you had them being nervous about each other in the beginning; really fits with the way they acted in Fun and Games. How you manage to keep all your storylines separated I'll never know. You had, what, 4 lines of continuity in the works (one now completed)? And the subtle differences in each of those series is what keeps people reading and enjoying all of your work.
Anyways, happy holidays, and looking forward to new ventures coming next year! Thanks for working so hard for us!
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved that what a way to end it bravo!
But what’s this you forgot the outtakes!
So I have taken the liberty to write you one because I love you so much!
"Jak?"
"Hmm"
"You know you said we could get a mirror in our room?"
"Sure. First thing tomorrow"
"Ok, the can we have it on the ceiling above the bed, that would be so hot"
Jak chokes and can’t decide whether to drown or kiss the horny little red head.
Yeah that totally came into my head when Dax stopped to admire himself in the mirror in the hall, its defiantly something I could see the little guy wanting, the mental image amused me greatly.
Aino ná
Arowanna
But what’s this you forgot the outtakes!
So I have taken the liberty to write you one because I love you so much!
"Jak?"
"Hmm"
"You know you said we could get a mirror in our room?"
"Sure. First thing tomorrow"
"Ok, the can we have it on the ceiling above the bed, that would be so hot"
Jak chokes and can’t decide whether to drown or kiss the horny little red head.
Yeah that totally came into my head when Dax stopped to admire himself in the mirror in the hall, its defiantly something I could see the little guy wanting, the mental image amused me greatly.
Aino ná
Arowanna