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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that I thought this story was fabulous! Its the only one of its kind that I've found so far; it made me laugh out loud several times and cringe once (yeah, you know the spot). Thanks for the fun read, and I hope you pick it back up sometime!
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL okay, I've only played Mass Effect once, but I love your writing style and your pacing.
And, really, since I only have a general idea of what the game and the characters are about, believe me when I say you're an amazing writer. LOL
And, really, since I only have a general idea of what the game and the characters are about, believe me when I say you're an amazing writer. LOL
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard when I read "hookers and blow!" It had me laughing all last night and snickering all day today. I had to come back and say thank you. This whole thing is absurdly humorous. I think now I'll go read all of this again. Keep up the good work!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this! There's nothing like a good bromance and I think that Alenko and Shepard could definitely have a bromance of legendary proportions. XD
Also: Oh Dear Baby Jesus. Imagining what Ash will say when Liara comes to her with this 'beej' problem will be, well, it will be interesting to say the least. lol
Also: Oh Dear Baby Jesus. Imagining what Ash will say when Liara comes to her with this 'beej' problem will be, well, it will be interesting to say the least. lol
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining. At first I wasn't very into it since Shepard seems to be quite OOC. But I guess that's because I played mine either very Paragon-y or extremely Renegade-y. The comedy works well too but I'd cut down on the sex jokes. It gets pretty tiring after a while. There are other types of jokes, you know. =D I guess, the main thing that pulls me is the Bromance. Not many Bromance in fiction, I just realized.
But again, this is AFF. So: Liara Threesome? Nyum!
8.5/10
But again, this is AFF. So: Liara Threesome? Nyum!
8.5/10
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty enjoyable read so far. Dialogue doesn't feel entirely natural in some parts, but since you're writing for humor it makes sense. I also like how certain elements from the game are worked in (randomly hitting buttons on the mining laser, for example).
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... I'm sorry, I can't laugh any more. I would pity Shepard and Alenko, but they, frankly, deserve it. Also, clueless, innocent Liara is adorable, though I'm surprised that the two of them haven't commented on our favorite space gypsy jailbait yet.
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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I'm dying here...
"Diiiiibs"....
*Ded*
Loving the bromance. But loving that you haven't turned Ash into some weird 'cuz that's the way women are' parody. She's still a tough-ass soldier.
Looking forward to more of this...
oh...also...Ball sweat? *SNORT* Love!
"Diiiiibs"....
*Ded*
Loving the bromance. But loving that you haven't turned Ash into some weird 'cuz that's the way women are' parody. She's still a tough-ass soldier.
Looking forward to more of this...
oh...also...Ball sweat? *SNORT* Love!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Jesus, we get it, it's not M/M. Christ.