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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far! You have a very creative way of painting imagery; and a strong, but not overwhelming vocabulary. I hope to read more soon! I haven't actually read a story that handled mental illness this well, so I'm excited to see where you go with it. : )
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sigh I hate reviewing for AFF since it likes to eat my reviews. -________- But I really enjoyed this story, ALOT. Where the main characters are not completley perfect or sane, for that matter. Actually any AU's are interesting if they're written well xD hmm you write Sora in a way that makes the readers live his life. We're just as confused as he is. Like, is any of this for real or not? And it's funny how Riku gets so involved with Sora..or maybe he's not. Ahh so confusing, yet addicting.
I hope you update the story when you can ^^
I hope you update the story when you can ^^
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it. i want to know what happen next.
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. I love the originality and your writing style especially. It's easy to read and I was instantly sucked into the story the moment I read your Author's Note! I hope you update soon, because I haven't seen an interesting story on this site that delves into mental illness with the finesse and knowledge you display! It's a truly interesting story and I can't wait to read more. :]
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm curious to know what color the walls really are...
I like it :) Can't wait to read the next update.
I like it :) Can't wait to read the next update.
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHH THE MIND-FUCKERY. O.O
I can't tell if he's simply hallucinating or not...perhaps a hallucianation that hit right before Sora was about to take his pills, and it just got worse because he never ended up taking them? Scary. And of course, how is Riku involved? Not at all, or is he causing all this?
Argh, you gotta update soon, cause I'm hooked! Great story! ^^
~LiT~
I can't tell if he's simply hallucinating or not...perhaps a hallucianation that hit right before Sora was about to take his pills, and it just got worse because he never ended up taking them? Scary. And of course, how is Riku involved? Not at all, or is he causing all this?
Argh, you gotta update soon, cause I'm hooked! Great story! ^^
~LiT~