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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad. Although it was a a tiny bit too cheesy for my liking, and I have to admit that I skipped quite quickly to the end, sorry. The romance parts of DAO were ridiculous and just too unnatural and made me cringe more often than not. Focussing on smut between Alistair and the PC in your fic would be more fun to read than trying to turn an obviously adult game into a sickly sweet romance. D8 (Just too bad that he's straight or he would be more interesting.)
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no not alistar its leliana