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for First Knight

by Badpie24

schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I just found this story, read all three chapters and now I'm wondering when you're going to update! I love Female Noble/Alistair stories! This is my new favorite story :) Hope to read more!
person Kabraxal
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully sweet story. The intimacy and light banter between the two was touching and really played well. You seemed to have Alistair perfectly captured... it actually felt like this was in game. Wish the scene was in the game. It was beautiful and it was a tribute to the romance. Thank you.
person Dvorchak
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I love how you manage to capture Alistair's naive charm, and his adorable awkwardness!
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah Nelly, that was an intense 3 chapters!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I told myself that I'd read this after I got DA:O. It was a good plan :)

Your writing is lovely as always. Now you need to put some Mass Effect on this site to further enrich the community of naughties :P
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
By far the best Dragon Age smut story on this site yet. I'd love to see more stories from you,
person kongxing
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story... though it could use more breathing room between sex scenes, it's nice. Alistair is fun to write, I imagine, though I would find the task of putting him to 'work' daunting – he doesn't appear to be too dexterous.

Good job, hopefully you'll write more 'colorful' works in the future.
person Cytherae
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Badpie, and this was just their firs night then?

*fans herself*
Can we hope for...mm...more knights? ;)
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I enjoyed this little fic. It was very true to the game scenes, in both dialog and the general feel of the "sex" during gameplay. I remember thinking how wonderfully romantic it all was, and how sweet he was when trying to be charming and fumbling his way through XD Alistair has got such a huge grip on me right now, it's a shame there aren't more stories with him on the site!
person Sammi
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ayeeee! that was such a nice read! <3 !