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Really liked please update

I like the way you used her nerves about the mission as an excuse for the true nature of her condition. I could have conceivably envisioned Kaidan leaving her to rest after she told him she was sick, but I like that you didn't do that, instead showing them comfortably sleeping together. It was a sweet moment. They don't make the conduit...that is interesting. I've got all sort of ideas as to where your going with this but I'll keep my mouth shut...I'm interested to see what you have in mind. Looking forward to the next chapter.