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"They made it out of the monastery with ease before any of the crusaders were able to talk to the Spirit Healer and return to the realm of the living."

Hahaha, what a horrible thought! If every time you cleared an instance, every mob and every boss spawned at the entrance at once! Haha, lawlz, that little quip made me laugh out loud. And, heh, the first thought through my head when Alassiel insisted Yssa ride behind her instead was "Oh no, Vimwald is going to have some competition!"

But their relationship is neat. I wonder how long Yssa's naivete will fascinate him?

haha, dawww, this is a cute story, haha, especially this last chapter! I like Vimwald. he's alright. I think I like his companions more though, heh, nothing against him, it's just that they kinda stand out a little more. especially Ixel and Dorlin, haha, their dialogue is great. man, especially Dorlin's. he's got that thick dwarven accent, but instead of making it unreadable, you do an excellent job of getting the sound onto the page without losing coherence. it's pretty refreshing!

one small note- you called the little night elf sister Kydna (or something), and then the next line down you call her Kisna. but I am excited to see them in Scarlet Monastary. makes me wonder what other adventures they'll be having there.

*sighs*...this is almost too much for me I think...I love your writing but the details...wow...more please soon

lets all say aaaawwwwwwwwww...that's adorable it really is. Perfect even...love Vinwald (adored twyla btw hated what happened to her)...so I look forward to the rest..more...now chopchop

So I get the feeling Twyla and Vinwald will end up confronting each other. Will Vinwald end up as a death knight? Or him as a paladin and her as an undead? I haven't read the related works but I sure will now. Thank you for posting the chapters. Good luck with your studies.

Love it. Makes the end (as we know it) of Twyla's all the more heart-wrenching, though. Can't wait to read more!

ok you got me...very misty eyed I am about that..it's lovely. Please more...and soon