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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. I like Vera and Kristoph, not together but I like their characters. You did a good job writing them.
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not too keen on rape, but otherwise this was an interesting read. You could do with more exposition and detail, and the way your put the dialogue was a bit stilted. To put it more simply, you left too much to the readers' imaginations; this sort of writing needs to be meatier, at the risk of sounding trite.
3/5.
-Karl
3/5.
-Karl